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Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Wow Becka, you're freaking gorgeous! I love your eyes.
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: A Timeless Masquerade
I like it a lot! Good word choices, and a unique idea. Keep posting stuff, I want to see more of your work.
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: Anatomy of a Shooter [2]
This was an interesting and unique idea. I'm not totally sure that I got it, or if there was something specifically to get, but either way I enjoyed it. Your ...
Jan 25, 2010 -
Re: Feelings on Atheism
I agree with both of you. That comment is the one thing that bothers me most, as if it's impossible to be moral without religion or God. It especially annoys ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: Feelings on Atheism
It makes no sense in being a theist or an atheist at all.Belief or non belief in God cannot play a role in influencing what happens in your life. If ...
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Wow Jenna, you've got some very pretty eyes! Gray eyes are so cool, I wish mine were gray.
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: The Fox
Thanks for reading guys, glad everyone liked it! I always appreciate it when people take the time to review. Out of curiosity did anyone happen to check out the song ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: The Fox
His teeth upon your throat His claws upon your breast I get all the diction that you try and use with this piece, and it makes it all the better, ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: The Fox
For anyone interested, I was listening to this when I wrote the poem, so if you like you can give it a listen because the emotions it evokes (for me ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: silly girl
Silly girl I know what you were thinking Saw it in your eyes That first time Eyes like ice beneath that hair like night I can remember your laugh Laughing ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Teaser Tuesdays!
There she blows.
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Writing tips
In my opinion the only truly good writing advice is to simply keep writing and keep creating stories. People can tell you a million different ways to enhance your writing ...
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: What book would make you attracted to a person if you...
Anything by Cormac McCarthy. Also just about any good literature. Heck, it'd be great just to see a girl that was reading a book that WASN'T Twilight (not to say ...
Dec 24, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
June you're very freaking pretty!
Dec 23, 2009 -
Re: The Most Beautiful Girl in the World
You're a very good writer! You have a lot of descriptive ability and it keeps the story moving and flowing well from paragraph to paragraph. I didn't think it was ...
Dec 17, 2009
